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So I got creative in math class...

I'ts my spare right now, so I typed up this ... song... poem...  thing about one of my friends.

I dunno. Give me some feed back if you want, or whatever.

Hair spreads across the pillow

You sleep away the night

You don’t know what I feel for you

I know to keep that sight

 

You’ll never know if I can help it

Wipe away my tears

And in my dream you understood

Accepted all my fears

 

(And) I’ll never hold you,

Never kiss you,

Never call you dear.

See, when I say I love you

It isn’t what you hear

Oh, if I could hold you

Whisper in your ear

Baby how I love you

It’s all you’ll never hear

 

My lips will never touch you

Never taste your skin

You’d hate the love I have for you

My semi-secret sin

My girl, how strong I feel for you

I cannot even start

My friend. My love. Eternally

SHUT UP my aching heart

 

You’ll never know if I can help it

Wipe away my tears

And in my dream you understood

Accepted all my fears

 

Girl, you’re sleeping soundly

I cannot haunt your dreams

I hold no more than kin for you

Well

Only so it seems

 

The truth is that you’ll never know

What I feel for you

And if you’d ever ask me

I’ll say it isn’t true.


Yeah... I need to not write things and focus on math, huh? hehe. AH well.

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azalea_j
Feb. 13th, 2008 08:06 pm (UTC)
You kidding? ANYTHING trumps math- especially writing. ~-^
-And that was beautiful. I could never write poetry, so I idolize those who can. Makes me wonder who the lucky girl is. :D
hdluff4eva
Feb. 13th, 2008 08:13 pm (UTC)
Ahem.


Yes...

Well...
azalea_j
Feb. 13th, 2008 11:41 pm (UTC)
Oh? So this is real? I thought maybe you'd written it as a sort of 'as if' valintine, but it's serious? Oooooooo *Is curious* But I shall leave you alone. I shant pester.

...

Much.
hdluff4eva
Feb. 14th, 2008 07:26 pm (UTC)
Haha. Actually Matt wrote the poem, I changed it into a song. We tweaked the lyrics at lunch today. It is now gender non-specific, haha.

I guess he was feeling heterosexual that day... hmmm...

But yeah. Gave me the poem like, early, and math was boring.
thought_goddess
Feb. 14th, 2008 12:19 am (UTC)
Aww, this was a tad depressing, though still good, and certainly better than math.
Math fails. At life.
Also. I was thinking a GSA meeting for next Thursday... can you check with people and see if that's ok? And I'm sorry, I kind of left you hanging with the money we raised from the cookies.
hdluff4eva
Feb. 14th, 2008 07:24 pm (UTC)
Haha, no worries. I'll let Matt and Maddie know... erm... is that... other... guy coming anymore?
thought_goddess
Feb. 14th, 2008 10:11 pm (UTC)
K sweet, thanks! And uh....*thinks* ...Greg? Was his name Greg? I have no idea, man. lol
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